Spot the liarthis little story is based on my own quote: "How can a person think if so many voices are screaming at them?"
Wow that was incredible the way you described the detail the words you use just everything is amazing I was listening to a sad song just before I read this which added to the tention of this little short text. Just going to to point out a few spelling mistakes though but that's all. Keep doing what your doing please take this as a complement ; I'm sure you could take your writing to a whole new level if you put your mind to it. Please be writing more so I can read them. Thank you it was nice to read this!